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21 April 2015

Repentance

POETICbug_atozchallenge

POETICbug_Repentance

In the shattered pieces of glasses,
In the torn window sheets,
In every hurtful memories,
In my wretched heart beat,
All I see is the reflection of repentance,
For betraying you and your love.

This poem is submitted to the following challenges-
#A to Z April Challenge 2015 
#Ultimate Blog Challenge April 2015 
#Write Tribe Pro Blogger Challenge April 2015
#NaPoWriMo April 2015

Image Credits - Google Images
Poem © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Creative Commons Licence

6 comments:

  1. Chrys FeyApril 21, 2015 at 6:10 AM

    That was awesome! I loved it! Full of emotion and pain. Well done! :)

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  2. AnonymousApril 21, 2015 at 12:45 PM

    I am amazed at how you are able to convey such a lot using so few words. Loved this one.
    *Shantala @ ShanayaTales*

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    1. Salvwi PrasadApril 22, 2015 at 12:53 AM

      Thank you Shantala. :)
      Trying to constrain my expression to fewer words for this year's challenge. Though I am comfortable otherwise. :)

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  3. Haneen IbrahimApril 21, 2015 at 2:37 PM

    wow! that's harsh. Beautiful as usual.

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