PadmaShree, Sri Jayanta Mahapatra once said,"There is something in me that refuses to die. It’s there, somewhere deep inside me perhaps. And this is poetry." The genesis of POETICbug was thus an act of unleashing the curbed thoughts in the form of poems. POETICbug,says, "I praise; I dare; I invoke care; You write, recite my glory; I am, Poetry." -Taking forward the spirit of poetry !
Haiku - Rain
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 18 - Letter R
RAIN
From the blessed above
Onto to her slender waist
Diamond droplets fall
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Quit
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 17 - Letter Q
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 17 - Letter Q
QUIT
To break out of fetters
Reach out to inspiring new
Is to move, not quit
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Peacock
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 16 - Letter P
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 16 - Letter P
PEACOCK
Elegance fanned out
Glorious portray of art
Nature's masterpiece
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Optimism
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 15 - Letter O
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 15 - Letter O
OPTIMISM
When dark clouds shroud sky
It's not sunlight, away gone
Its rain arrives home
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Could not post yesterday due to net connectivity issue. But would still like to continue the Challenge. :)
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Nest
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 14 - Letter N
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 14 - Letter N
NEST
Twigs and leaves interlaced
Clinging to a hope, no fall
Little lives squeaking
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Mother
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 13 - Letter M
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 13 - Letter M
MOTHER
The shawl in winter
The water, quenching summer
The cover from rain
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Letter
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 12 - Letter L
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 12 - Letter L
LETTER
Emotions preserved
On frail paper forever
As reminiscent
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Kite
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 11 - Letter K
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 11 - Letter K
KITE
Kissing the cold air
With friends, love and many more
Up, dances the kite
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Joy
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 10 - Letter J
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 10 - Letter J
JOY
A tangy squeeze of smile
Elated in spirits, abound
Little drop of joy
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Ink
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 9 - Letter I
In the veins it flows
Shaping thoughts into words, strong
A writer's lifeline
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 9 - Letter I
INK
Shaping thoughts into words, strong
A writer's lifeline
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 8 - Letter H
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 8 - Letter H
HAIKU
Seven Five Seven
Prompts from nature, its creations
Forms poetry, small
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Ganga
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 7 - Letter G
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 7 - Letter G
GANGA
Holy abundance
Cleansing irrevocable sins
The mighty Ganga flows
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Flower Girl
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 6 - Letter F
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 6 - Letter F
FLOWER GIRL
Backdrop of dawn's soft light
Emerges the flower girl
Pristine and pious
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Earthquake
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 5 - Letter E
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 5 - Letter E
EARTHQUAKE
Grains of sand dancing
To drum beats of mighty earth
As it cracked open
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Darkness
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 4 - Letter D
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 4 - Letter D
DARKNESS
Weight of the black load
Vision calls for nearest help
When light absconds for long
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Cocoon
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 3 - Letter C
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 3 - Letter C
COCOON
Home of butterfly
The cocoon hangs empty now
Underside the leaf
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Bus (Indian)
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 2 - Letter B
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 2 - Letter B
BUS (Indian)
Blowing out asthmatically
Overloaded, exhausted, in pain
Great Indian bus
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - Autumn
This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 1 - Letter A
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 1 - Letter A
AUTUMN
The lone backyard bench
Kissed by fallen maple leaves
Orange, as autumn.
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Socially Active
Everything I do
I type onto you
You complain never not
No if no but
You gave back friends
Lost in the woods
Did take away few
In a red hot mood
A buffet of expression
news, games and more
Nothing at one time
Now options galore
Important and not so
all dates in my sight
No misses in wishes
I feel so light
Like a daily chore
I login to indulge
In liking comments
And share no grudge
My typing speed has increased
& my boss seems happy
But family has the sad emoticon
'cause I only speak to my lappy
To known ; unknown on the network
Each one I say "Hello"
But I didn't know my roomate's
Favourite colour is yellow
I'm available virtually
In real too busy
Meet you at the news feed
In here its crazy
© Copyright Salvwi Prasad [POETICbug]
I type onto you
You complain never not
No if no but
You gave back friends
Lost in the woods
Did take away few
In a red hot mood
A buffet of expression
news, games and more
Nothing at one time
Now options galore
Important and not so
all dates in my sight
No misses in wishes
I feel so light
Like a daily chore
I login to indulge
In liking comments
And share no grudge
My typing speed has increased
& my boss seems happy
But family has the sad emoticon
'cause I only speak to my lappy
To known ; unknown on the network
Each one I say "Hello"
But I didn't know my roomate's
Favourite colour is yellow
I'm available virtually
In real too busy
Meet you at the news feed
In here its crazy
© Copyright Salvwi Prasad [POETICbug]
Blank Spaces
Breaking a relation where love exists but hidden is difficult. Every romantic love relationship starts blissfully. As time passes the soaked-in-love partners begin to note the "Blank Spaces". Squabbles turn into banter and then take the shape of feud. Both the involved side generally tend to forget to overlook and forgive the other. All that started with "we" begins to end with "I". And eventually the decision to part is taken. But where love still exists, parting becomes temporary and miraculously works in favour of their relation. They realize that a little forgiveness could bestow on them lifelong love.
So let's begin to mend our ways and fill those blank spaces in our love relationship.
BLANK SPACES
The way it started, I remember,
Those pleasant memories of summer,
But how the cards fell,
I could not know,
The sound of it went unheard,
Amidst the noise that surrounded us,
The creases that were formed,
Bearing the stresses for long,
How the threads moved apart,
And the yarn (un)spun,
Neither you nor I could hold,
Hold back the raging flames,
The burns , the bruises revealed,
How the home turned into a house,
All that love leaking out,
Leaving behind red bricks uncovered,
As "we" got strangled between you and me,
And "I" stood alone,
How silence became our conversation,
Happiness, a far dream,
The same cup of coffee tasted bitter,
For the same you and me,
As intolerance became our tenant,
We walked away our own way,
With lost love, wrecked heart,
Knowing not the tortuous path,
And how it could merge again,
Before this rots and beings to smell,
Let's mend our mistakes,
And fill the blank spaces.
© Copyright Salvwi Prasad [POETICbug]
So let's begin to mend our ways and fill those blank spaces in our love relationship.
BLANK SPACES
The way it started, I remember,
Those pleasant memories of summer,
But how the cards fell,
I could not know,
The sound of it went unheard,
Amidst the noise that surrounded us,
The creases that were formed,
Bearing the stresses for long,
How the threads moved apart,
And the yarn (un)spun,
Neither you nor I could hold,
Hold back the raging flames,
The burns , the bruises revealed,
How the home turned into a house,
All that love leaking out,
Leaving behind red bricks uncovered,
As "we" got strangled between you and me,
And "I" stood alone,
How silence became our conversation,
Happiness, a far dream,
The same cup of coffee tasted bitter,
For the same you and me,
As intolerance became our tenant,
We walked away our own way,
With lost love, wrecked heart,
Knowing not the tortuous path,
And how it could merge again,
Before this rots and beings to smell,
Let's mend our mistakes,
And fill the blank spaces.
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