This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 2 - Letter B
After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge. I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.
Day 2 - Letter B
BUS (Indian)
Blowing out asthmatically
Overloaded, exhausted, in pain
Great Indian bus
This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014
Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)
I really like this haiku, particularly the image of the bus "breathing out asthmatically". Visiting from the A-to-Z challenge ...
ReplyDeleteAsthmatically indeed!
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