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I do not wish forever

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POETICbug_I do not wish forever
If life was forever,
There would be no Fall,
No leaf would crumble,
In this world's fancy ensemble.

There is grace in leaving,
Like beauty that Autumn brings,
And for every leaf that is gone,
A new one would be born.

I do not wish forever and live alone,
Writing epitaph on loved ones tombstone,
I pray to stay enough,
With compassion and love.

But when I am gone far away,
I wish my memories may
linger without any grumble,
In this world's fancy ensemble.



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26 comments:

  1. Ajay PaiMay 10, 2015 at 6:02 AM

    True. Till the time one lives, live with compassion and love. Good take on the prompt.

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  2. Alok singhalMay 10, 2015 at 6:26 AM

    That was a unique one, even i echo the same words...though many would think otherwise.

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  3. the little princessMay 10, 2015 at 9:17 AM

    I guess it takes a lot of deep insight and understanding of life to say I do not want life forever...and that's a beautiful thought to live life by! nice lines!!

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  4. TenyMay 12, 2015 at 2:08 AM

    Nice! :) Immortality got its disadvantages, no matter how glorified it is ;)

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  5. Sachin PrabhuMay 12, 2015 at 11:24 PM

    amazing :)

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  6. MeghaMay 13, 2015 at 2:53 AM

    :) You just spoke my mind, what fun life would be if we had everything & every being exist forever!
    There is a reason God created both life and death.
    I like your take on the theme,
    you have a really beautiful Blog Salvwi. :)

    Regards,
    Megha

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    1. Salvwi PrasadMay 13, 2015 at 3:01 AM

      Thank you so much Megha. :) Appreciate your compliments.

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  7. UnknownMay 13, 2015 at 8:52 AM

    I wish to disappear like a shooting star,
    and face the death which would heal all my scars.

    Now these which I read,
    seem like a medicine for those who read.

    As right now, at these words I gaze,
    wonder how easily, can they amaze.

    Great!

    God bless you.

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    1. Salvwi PrasadMay 13, 2015 at 10:38 AM

      Thank you for visiting Vishal and for these beautiful lines :)

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  8. AnonymousMay 13, 2015 at 7:02 PM

    There's a rhythm in every post of yours Salvwi :) It's like written effortlessly in flow! Best Wishes!

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  9. SimranMay 17, 2015 at 2:53 AM

    A beautiful message here :) A life lived with love n compassion is worth.

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  10. the factfictionMay 17, 2015 at 5:24 AM

    Beautiful salvwi ... very beautiful indeed.

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  11. lIl hIgHMay 17, 2015 at 5:56 AM

    Nice poem !! Enjoyed reading it :)

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  12. aativasMay 17, 2015 at 7:59 AM

    Enjoyed reading!

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  13. MeghaMay 18, 2015 at 10:20 AM

    Beautiful! Nicely written

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