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Haiku - Bus (Indian)

This is my second year in A to Z April Challenge 2014.

After the enriching experience of 2013 I decided to continue yet again. And this time more streamlined. As I was learning to write 'haiku' I thought to make it my theme for this year's challenge.  I learnt haiku with a image is far more captivating and so I will try to combine my haiku with a relevant photo. I am sure with so many experienced poets participating in this challenge I would get the right kind of feedback for my haiku to improve. There could not be a better forum than A to Z April Challenge to get readers and reviewers for your work. I am thankful for this opportunity to the entire team.

Day 2 - Letter B


BUS (Indian)



Blowing out asthmatically
Overloaded, exhausted, in pain
Great Indian bus

This is a submission to A to Z April Challenge 2014

Photo Credits - Google Images
Haiku - © Copyright Salvwi Prasad (POETICbug)

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2 comments:

  1. I really like this haiku, particularly the image of the bus "breathing out asthmatically". Visiting from the A-to-Z challenge ...

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  2. Asthmatically indeed!
    http://effervescencia.blogspot.in/2014/04/c-is-for-critical-analysis.html

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