Kismet maneuvered our meet,
Crossing the cross-way when I sprained my feet,
Agonizing pain ran through the nerves,
Not a heart came, a pinch of kindness to serve,
I moved to the sidewalk near,
Suddenly felt your unknown touch to cure,
Barrels of tear soaked my soul,
When you felt my ache without being told,
Your eyes conveyed a thousand words, deep,
Couldn't let you go stray but keep,
Knitted are we two, with the thread of affection,
No human; dear dog you taught me a lesson.
TRIVIA
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{ This was how one of my friend got a pet dog in a stray one. }
© Copyright Salvwi Prasad[POETICBug]
UNexpected ending.
ReplyDeleteQUite nice.
I am following.
~Naila Moon
http://yaknowstuff.blogspot.com/2013/04/k-is-for.html
Ha! I didn't expect the dog at the end.
ReplyDeleteThanks Naila and Kristin that you liked the poem
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http://www.shellygoodmanwright.com/apps/blog/show/25611294-killing-a-character
Nice, and I picture I could see in my mind as I read. This blog also posted about Kindness, thought you'd like to read hers. https://plus.google.com/110123616390516099425/posts
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Lisa @ http://www.celticadlx.blogspot.com
Ahhh sweetness :) A dog's love cannot be compared with any human's, it is the only unconditional love a human enjoys other than from one's mother. So glad your friend adopted the dog :) My 'D' post was about animal adoption.
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Loved it. I wasn't expecting it to be a dog either. Simply Sarah H
ReplyDeleteUnexpected ending. Good post! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat surprise ending! I explored kismet as a possible K topic, but realized it's not a familiar term for me. I certainly understand it in your poem, though!
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SiouxsiesMusings
Thank you S Wright, Susan, Sumita, Lisa, Sheethal,Sarah. I am glad my poem caught your attention. :)
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