I’m on the sea-shore, inside the shack,
The breeze singing lullaby yet sleep I lack,
Searching our rendezvous’ reminiscence,
Under the blanket of your absence,
Am I missing you or I am just an insomniac?
TRIVIA
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{ An insomniac's romantic encounter and hence the confusion of the obvious sleeplessness. }
Just tried the AABBA rhyming used in limerick, though this isn't of that genre entirely. Or may be. What do you think ?
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Is it Day 9 or Day 10...the poster says I and 10. Used to do a lot of poetry on a blog years ago. The AABB or ABAB etc. tried them all out and had such fun. Your blog is inspiring me to get back to it. Here's the link to one blog where a group of us decided to put down our nonsense back in the day :)
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I'm Just Jane in there. My current blog: http://suetospeak.blogspot.in/
Oh, and i can relate...used to be an insomniac :)
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
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http://www.shellygoodmanwright.com/apps/blog/show/25551594-inspiration
Thanks Sumita.... The 10 in the pic is the date.... It's definitely Day 9..
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It's a fun poem, I like it!
ReplyDeleteI like your poem, it captures the feeling of unrequited love beautifully
ReplyDeleteGood and beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteI like it. This month I am an insomniac. A to Z crazy here!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your poem! It seemed to follow the limerick format in the first four lines. Nice images.
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SiouxsiesMusings
Amazingly Bful :)
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